Gangster (new)

[Ewan]

Thanks for looking,

Crit welcome, of course

 

[Flash In The Pan]

The face appears to be made out of the same material as the wall...

 

[Big_Bill]

It's a nice capture mate and I like the B&W conversion...
I like to noise but I think it may be better with just a touch less? :shrug:

 

[lukewoodford]

The face appears to be made out of the same material as the wall...

Thats a classic! Flash has a point, remove the grain from the face and its good.

 

[Flash In The Pan]

Actually, it would work well if it was done intentionally with the right subject

 

[Ewan]

Thanks guys, will go back and try a less grainy version

 

[Ewan]

I've replaced it with a much less grainy version.

 

[lukewoodford]

IMO loose some of tat road or whatever it is, doesn;t reall add. Maybe loose it all and go for a square crop.

 

[annao]

Ok so it looks like the grainy face issue has already been sorted.. but i'm afraid this still looks less ganster... more kid waiting for school bus?

BTW i ain't no gansta, i'm a square Mummy I'm afraid.....:shrug:

Anna

 

[ding76uk]

Nice shot, but agree square crop would work really well. There is too much room at the bottom of the pic.

 

[Dave Stone]

I would crop the road out right up to the kerb. Nice shot though.