Gemma

[Betty]

Hope she likes them

Last one tightly cropped, I see now Ive lost a lot of quality, sorry about that

 

[Lady Pitstop]

Good poses, however, on the last one I would like to see her other arm or even just her hand on her hip maybe. She looks nice and relaxed though

 

[Betty]

She loved it, first time she has been in the studio

See what you mean about that last one, thanks LP

 

[BRASH]

Lovely relaxed shots. A slight sharpen may be?

 

[lee]

I've had a little play with the first one hope you don't mind, if you do just say the word and its gone.

Just changed the colour and gave it a sharpen.

 

[Betty]

No problem at all Lee Thats what the "Edit" tick is for

Like it

 

[Marik]

Second and third are out of focus.

 

[hypnotic]

Third one for me ... But in focus please ...

White balance is slightly off on all three.

Get her back in the studio and take some more.

 

[gareth01422]

Lee, you did a good job with that one.

 

[Rozzy]

dont like the first two, shes not relaxed, and leaning too far forward, she's uncomfortable being shot sat down.

 

[zeroeseight]

Don't know if it's a focus problem or if maybe you using too small an aperture and suffering from diffraction (although if it were I wouldn't think it would be that pronouced as what is shown in the last). Otherwise I rather like the first two, the subject seems relaxed.

 

[JPS]

I am drawn to the 'see thru' leggings on her knee, maybe try with different trousers ??? I think they spoil the shot(s).