Goose Squadron - Edit Added
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It is different, and that is not a bad thing, so well done for putting some thought into the image, only thing is that I am unsure if I like it or not 
As an expansion on the idea, I wonder how it would look with a coloured background, or with the birds white on black.
As an expansion on the idea, I wonder how it would look with a coloured background, or with the birds white on black.
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You did yes. Typically I had got 60 odd views and no critique in the bird thread so dropped it into the General section. Soon as I do that someone comments on here as well..... doh.
Martyn, yes its something I've been toying with, different bg's and bird colours, possibly an Andy Warhol type panel of 4.
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Martyn, yes its something I've been toying with, different bg's and bird colours, possibly an Andy Warhol type panel of 4.
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I also am not sure about it one thing is I don t dislike it, I think you are on the right lines of wanting it to look more like a sketch maybe if the blacks wern't so black if you know what I mean then it would look more penciled in, just a thought
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Sorry about that I was thinking about it
I would also try removing one bird so that you are left with 5, an odd number always looks better compositionally, for some reason
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yes I see what you mean, I'll give it a go.
Sorry about that I was thinking about it
I would also try removing one bird so that you are left with 5, an odd number always looks better compositionally, for some reason
Well at least you took the time to consider your response
I wonder why an odd number looks better? but it does. To be honest there were originally 5 birds but with a gap so I copied and pasted one of them in to fill it. 
Andy
