I probably couldnt do any better but I find the red wing tip a bit distracting personally. Apart from that I like them.
Number 2 with a longer lens or a tight crop could be very effective with the Harrier and waterspray only.
I agree with the tight crop idea.
Give it a go, you might change your mind.:shrug:
ok, just done some quick edits, boosted the contrast a little, applied some crops and done some crude clone brush.....