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First time in years I've tried a serious portrait. I welcome any criticism and help.
Thanks for looking.
Steve
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I like it, and the model is very attractive. If anything, perhaps the face is a tiny bit too "white" but i think this is down to personal preference?

Good job :)
 
Nice composition but i would agree with Annao, the face looks too white imo, not enough contrast.
 
Thanks. The model wanted almost all facial detail over exposed with hardly any detail showing.

Also added the ] to the end of the 2nd shot so that it now appears :)
 
nice shots ... first is a little bright as is said .. but you can to an extent get away with it in B&W .. No 1 for me anyways .. :)
 
NO 2. nice shot
 
Hi

Has to be one for me. Perhaps it is the subject but the first image shows less flaws. the second you seem to be drawn to the mouth but not in a good way.

Cheers

Nate
 
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