Optomized for Google I would have thought Adam to help get on first page. Just need my phone to ring and the inbox to get used. I get marketing emails saying they can inprove things.
thanks for your thoughts.
The site doesn't look too bad, but the copy could use a lot of work. The spelling, punctuation and grammer all need attention. It switches from third- to first-person and back again, the capitalisation is inconsistent, and overall it just doesn't read very well. As a rough guess, I'd suggest that the word count needs to be cut by at least 70% to give it some focus.
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