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This hopefulls shows that relentless is a bad drink............
Just a can of relentless........
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I think that a "Biohazard" sign in the background might have been more appropriate...
Overall, I like the idea, though personally, I'd have tried to avoid the "busy" section of the can, with the barcode, nutritional information and other blurb showing quite so much, maybe a 10/15' turn clockwise of the can, and a bit less light to the rear of can. While we're on the can, I find the slight flare on the RHS of the "R" just a Tad overblown - I think I get what you were shooting for - the light "ping" flare on the spot, but it again, to my taste, it's a little overblown. I'd also, and again it's personal taste, like to see the can "sweating" a bit... just to emphasise the fact that it's got a cold drink in it (even if it hasn't, and you've actually just drunk the contents
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Overall, I like the idea, though personally, I'd have tried to avoid the "busy" section of the can, with the barcode, nutritional information and other blurb showing quite so much, maybe a 10/15' turn clockwise of the can, and a bit less light to the rear of can. While we're on the can, I find the slight flare on the RHS of the "R" just a Tad overblown - I think I get what you were shooting for - the light "ping" flare on the spot, but it again, to my taste, it's a little overblown. I'd also, and again it's personal taste, like to see the can "sweating" a bit... just to emphasise the fact that it's got a cold drink in it (even if it hasn't, and you've actually just drunk the contents
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Great feedback 
many thanks buddy.
many thanks buddy.
