Liverpool ***EDIT ADDED***

[Just Dave]

I had a go today at street photography, when I went with Russell and Mark, bit uneasy though, so not that good but I tried, no cigar

Dave

 

[Toothie]

I like the compositions but they look a bit gray rather than B&W at therisk of getting laughed at (cos i dont really know what i am talking about) have you tried more contrast?

 

[68lbs]

I like the compositions but they look a bit gray rather than B&W at therisk of getting laughed at...

Actually... I agree... A little OoF with number #2 too - actually, think the focus might be on the bench's leg.

 

[rh1944]

#4 for me, I do like the cemetery and this headstone in particular. Nice to see Mark working hard. Will we see the result? Could you have tilted #3 a bit to the right? Thanks for another great day out, despite the miserable weather in the afternoon.

 

[whiteflyer]

I'll have to agree with all the above comments.

A bit more contrast
Slightly missed the focus (bench leg)
Needs a little tilt.


I nice reflection of the day

 

[Just Dave]

I like the compositions but they look a bit gray rather than B&W at therisk of getting laughed at (cos i dont really know what i am talking about) have you tried more contrast?

Thanks Ruth yes I agree they are a bit grey, I'll give them another go later

Actually... I agree... A little OoF with number #2 too - actually, think the focus might be on the bench's leg.

Yep Lee I was a bit conscious taking the shot as I didnt want him to see me

#4 for me, I do like the cemetery and this headstone in particular. Nice to see Mark working hard. Will we see the result? Could you have tilted #3 a bit to the right? Thanks for another great day out, despite the miserable weather in the afternoon.

Thanks Russell yes it was another good day out, thanks for your company

 

[whiteflyer]

Nice to see Mark working hard. Will we see the result?

Russell I wish I'd taken a lot more shot of this with different view points as I'm disappointed with what I got, maybe next time

 

[lukewoodford]

ignore

 

[eosjohn]

Nice set there Dave, My fave is the ladies at the Cathedral great pic well taken.

 

[Just Dave]

ignore

:shrug:

Nice set there Dave, My fave is the ladies at the Cathedral great pic well taken.

Thanks John

Russell I wish I'd taken a lot more shot of this with different view points as I'm disappointed with what I got, maybe next time

Nice shot mark

 

[Just Dave]

Is This any better

Original

 

[rh1944]

Russell I wish I'd taken a lot more shot of this with different view points as I'm disappointed with what I got, maybe next time

Not to be sniffed at Mark. The B&W works well.

Is This any better

It works better for me.

 

[whiteflyer]

That much better IMHO Dave

 

[Just Dave]

yes to me it looks better, thanks Mark and Russell

 

[eosjohn]

That looks a lot better Dave, you've given it a lot more depth well done.

 

[Just Dave]

many thanks John

 

[Toothie]

the edit works well

 

[Just Dave]

Thanks Ruth I think so also