Lovely Lauren

[Elopix]

Please go easy on me, this is my first time shooting a model and this was my models first time modelling. (She's trying to get into the modelling business, so I did this to let her get used to being infront of a rather large camera)

I like this one because of the shadow...

and that one because it's very natural.... Her sister (who accomanied us on the shoot) had just called their brother a not-very-nice-name... so whilst she was laughing i decide to snap a few shots...


Please tell me what you honestly think... and Ideas on how to improve would be more than appreciated.

Very different from sports photography this eh? lol

Thanks
Elopix

 

[Flash In The Pan]

Pretty lass and nice shots, although you've chopped off her left hand in both pics and the bit of jean cuff/shoe in the second one is a bit distracting. On the plus side, I really like the lighting in the first pic

 

[lukewoodford]

I like the first one, the blurred background works really well i think.