Hi Rob, I'm certainly not qualified to C&C but it doesnt really work for me.
Not sure what the focus was but the front battery just doesnt seem sharp enough to me. When you have something dominant in the foreground like this with a shallow DOF then I think it has to be sharp and "powerful" and really scream "look at meeee".
This doesnt do that for me. It just sort of looks like a snap of some batteries.
Sorry if that sounds negative, but its just the way I see this image.
