my close-critique please
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I feel that this is lacking something to focus on. I understand the twig is supposed to be the main focus, but it's just not interesting enough for me.
I like the shadows from the sand dunes though, perhaps if it was taken in the afternoon light where you'd get even more shadows and nicer light, and if you replaced the twig with something more interesting, it would work better.
Hope that helps
I like the shadows from the sand dunes though, perhaps if it was taken in the afternoon light where you'd get even more shadows and nicer light, and if you replaced the twig with something more interesting, it would work better.
Hope that helps
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I feel that this is lacking something to focus on. I understand the twig is supposed to be the main focus, but it's just not interesting enough for me.
I like the shadows from the sand dunes though, perhaps if it was taken in the afternoon light where you'd get even more shadows and nicer light, and if you replaced the twig with something more interesting, it would work better.
Hope that helps
I can onlu agree with Glass Books - I'd also say be careful of placing your main focus (aka twig) on the centre horizontal line - it's cutting the shot in half and my eyes don't know where to look...