My Daughter and a friend

[grumpy69]

The one on the right is my daughter with her good friend. comments welcome

 

[EdBray]

Vignetting is good concentrates the attention to where you want it, exposure is good, but it looks like you have used on camera flash which isn't the most flattering. Looks like a good attempt to beef up a snapshot, but with a couple of willing models and a little time you could have done so much more.

 

[pearce_jj]

the complete absense of background makes it look almost like a nightclub shot to my eye. That said I like the way your daughters hair fades to black

 

[grumpy69]

Thank you for looking and your comments, it was a house party they had and the back ground was not to my liking, I know I need a flash gun it is on my need list. Thanks again