I'm no portrait expert, but I'd use a vertical orientation for the second one and I think it would be better if her was was either completely lit or completely in a shadow, this way it looks a bit like aliens are abducting her there
The first one would probably come out a little better with a bounced flash and her whole hands in the frame.
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