thanks for the comments, It was her first time posing for me. I have only just started shooting people too so my nerves didn't help.
pic 1
shot with: a d70 24-105 2.8
lit with: sb-25 behind used some muslin to diffuse light, sb 28 camera right with white brolly and another sb28 which was supposed to light the hair but didn't fire.
still have a LOT to learn with lighting but I'm LOVING the challange, strobist has a lot to answer for!
thanks
Will