Paris B&W

[Jackal]

Some B&W shots from Paris:


DSC_4898-2 by J_Bednarski Photo, on Flickr


DSC_4895-2 by J_Bednarski Photo, on Flickr

comments and critique welcome

 

[horrocks]

Nobody has commented on these. I can kinda figure why. Its not that they are poor, its just that there is something essential that isn't there. The POVs don't quite work, so the compositions are somehow awkward. #2 needs to be in portrait format I think - it doesn't work like this. Sky is uninteresting in #1, better in #2. I don't know. #2 has the potential. Turn it, perhaps try to unblock the shadows a bit in the tree and within the tower, and build the sky just slightly.

 

[Jackal]

Thanks for Your comment, I agree with You, and for me it is positive criticism, which will allow me (I hope) to improve my technique

 

[horrocks]

My pleasure. It can be frustrating when you don't draw any comments when you want some constructive crit. I hope I was of some help.