Please can i have some feedback

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Name
Sam
Edit My Images
Yes
1.
SJF_0025.jpg


2.
SJF_0026.jpg


3.
SJF_0031.jpg


4.
SJF_0023.jpg


5.
SJF_0022.jpg
 
definitely not dark

not sure about the DOF in #1
and the last one - interesting "bored now!"(y)
 
(y) I love them, what beautiful eyes. I have never taken portraits, but when I do, I can only hope they will be half as good as these! WELL done!! :clap::clap:




I :love: Canon
 
3 and 4 for me Nice shots, good character, deffo not dark look spot on.
Have you done any processing on the eyes in 1 and 2 as they look over processed?
 
Some great shots there especially 4,5, but

but, .... the EYES oh the EYES .. the first 2 have you gone to town on the sharpening or what. They are practically crystalized in the 1st, they dont fit in his head any more.
 
Good shots of the eye's captured the light spot on but try and have the child pull faces or play (I know it's hard but they enjoy it more)
 
I agree with some of the previous comments. The eyes of the first two are too sharp and look out of place. The more natural poses in 3 and 4 are better. Great lighting and exposure in all of them.
 
Does this tell a story,
In series of pics.
What you doing???
Hhhmmmm...
Thats it sonny...
Wheres My Hat.. Im outa hear...
Need To Nip First...This ill do...
Thanks for sharing keep up the good work
 
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