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I had recently bought Wx5 web design progam I have uploaded the new design.......Could i have some thought please on it....please note i have still only sample images/prices and have a lot more to do yet but a watchful eye is always appreciated:cool:

http://www.mjrphotographic.com
 
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I really like the Home Page.

About Me needs grammar & spellcheck.

I don't really understand the Gallery with the different sizes :shrug:

Not much other content to comment on so far........ but I DO like the Home Page :D
 
I see what you mean about the grammar check...OOPS! must get back to fix it....LOL
 
and i am really happy with the home page...8-)....done the film strip from scratch on photoshop.
 
Hi. There's something really weird about that site - my work completely blocks it - what on earth is going on in the code to do that?
 
Photodiva said:
Hi. There's something really weird about that site - my work completely blocks it - what on earth is going on in the code to do that?
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Do you mean your place of work?
any there should be no strange coding in the web page?!:thinking:

But I will take a look later and see if there is any strange stuff....:thumbs:
 
Hi. It opened at home so I've no idea why it was blocked.
Nice home page, text a bit large or too black may be, a matter of taste.
I think the coding suffers from div-itis. I would say that the keyword metadata is OK but google doesn't use it. There is precious little content for google.
 
a couple of thoughts..

not really any consistant layout.. examples - the gallery and information pages shift sideways a few pixels when they load, the text on different pages start at different points on the pages (contact and about for example)

also id remove the 2nd menu at the bottom of the page, there isnt any real need for it.

your twitter link reports "Sorry, that page doesn’t exist!"
 
thanks for all the ideas guys and girls....it is still very much a work in progress......

will take everything on board and rejig the bits and pieces....and twitter doesn't work.....wrong coding but then i am thinking of getting rid of twitter as i just can't see a point in it
 
Not much of an expert on websites, but with that said I think you should lose the little monsters at the bottom of the page altogether. Firstly it doesn't fit in with the styling of the website. Secondly: your facebook links to your private profile (not a fan page), your youtube account is blank, your twitter links nowhere and your flickr account has vastly more photos on it than the website - including a full res image of the only one you are currently selling.
 
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