Red Towel

[tank]

These shots were taken whilst i was fixing upa hosue in france. We took some time out and went for a swim in the lake. I took these shots and then edited them to try and show the tiredness and how drained we felt from all the work. (we are students remember)

C & C welcome

 

[moomike]

The 1st shot is excellent mate, great tones & composition imo

2nd doesn't quite work for me if I'm honest, can see what you were going for but I find the paint around the nose a bit distracting from that angle & the towel looks a bit like a funky hairstyle (please don't take offence at that )

1st shot is spot on though

 

[Mohain]

Actually I think I prefer No.2. Really like them both tho

 

[oldgit]

1st is the better of the 2 IMHO composition wise