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[peregrine_dave]

here i have 2 shots of a robin over a few days. both edited

any C&C is welcome

1

2

many thanks dave

 

[u8myufo]

Hi David, #1 looks a bit soft on the eye to me and #2 might have worked better if it had it`s head up and giving more eye contact.

 

[peregrine_dave]

it was my 1st editing

 

[erding]

Good effort. You appear to be able to get it within a close distance to you, would suggest you try work on getting more eye contact and being more level with you instead of the up or downward angle you have here.