You definitely need some movement in there, Pete. If you will, in the first shot, he looks as if he's doing a soundcheck - checking the snare or hats or something, rather than in full heads-down-see-you-at-the-end-guys mode.
The second shot is better - it's obviously posed and he looks like it's his own kit in this one. But please get rid of that bloody cable in front of the kick drum? After his face and the TAMA logo, it's the next thing I saw!