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Some flower shots
- Thread starter lonewonderer
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- Jim
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#2 & #4 for me, the 1st I feel has a bit too much harsh shadow, but great colours & #3 maybe less DOF would work better. I like the viewpoint of #2, and great use of wider angle makes the lavender radiate out from the viewer. Sorry, but the flower in the last one is a bit tatty, the background intrudes and again a bit of a harsh shadow. Just my comments, but the ones that I like - I like a lot.
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No 1 - bright and vibrant but looks un-natural as the steman are horizontal rather than vertical and theres a nasty shadow on the bottom R/H corner. - try rotating 90deg
2 - The main focal point is lost in the other flowers / leaves, next time try shooting a smaller aperture to isolate you main subject from the background, try to watch out for stray petals (L/H side) and try to fill the frame more with the subject of try and choose a flower with less clutter behind.
3 - Bright and sharp but its a bit lost in the background, try a smaller aperture or a different angle to help isolate the flower.
4 - There no real focus point in the image and theres a big shadow in the foreground - you could try shooting from a lower position capturing the flower tops and a bit of sky ?
5 - Doesn't do a lot for me - better subject isolation / angle but its a dead flower and theres a bad shadow on the LH side and the other flower head in the backgroud is distracting.
2 - The main focal point is lost in the other flowers / leaves, next time try shooting a smaller aperture to isolate you main subject from the background, try to watch out for stray petals (L/H side) and try to fill the frame more with the subject of try and choose a flower with less clutter behind.
3 - Bright and sharp but its a bit lost in the background, try a smaller aperture or a different angle to help isolate the flower.
4 - There no real focus point in the image and theres a big shadow in the foreground - you could try shooting from a lower position capturing the flower tops and a bit of sky ?
5 - Doesn't do a lot for me - better subject isolation / angle but its a dead flower and theres a bad shadow on the LH side and the other flower head in the backgroud is distracting.