Some Prom Pics I Was Asked To Take!

[snoop69]

Comments positive or negative welcome
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[EdinburghGary]

I think the 2nd from last has real merit, and the last is pretty good too. The rest I feel have a few issues, about to comment on them.

Gary.

 

[EdinburghGary]

Number 1 I feel has too much shadow / dark areas, and the guy picking his nose in the background is a real put off. The silver frame is distracting too, in short, less shadows and a better background would be good.



Number 2, there are very bright areas on the various backs, and I the guy not looking, whilst in such a prominent position is a shame. Its a busy scene.



Number 3 is actually good, although the flowers on the edge of the frame are a slight distraction, and I personally would have tried to keep those lovely windows in but, I also would have tried to loose the pipe and bench.



4 is a tad too dark, and the green thingy distracts IMO.



5, I like, but the feet are missing and the reflection bugs me. Guessing hard to avoid the 2nd crit.



6 I like, a tad over exposed?



Well done, looks like you guys had fun.

Gary.

 

[Toothie]

I would watch the backgrounds as some are a little cluttered. They are well composed otherwise though. They look a little soft but that could be resizing for web. Just make sure you watch your focus point

 

[snoop69]

Thanks for the comments so far - loads to take on board

Should have mentioned that these were taken at around 19.00hrs on a
dull evening in Dover.

They were pretty much point & shoot shots & yes it was very 'busy'
in the area as everyone was arriving or seeing off their loved ones

Im pretty new to all this so any help/advice is very welcome

 

[lukewoodford]

I like number 7 and 8 best, a few are a bit soft, but im new to this aswell, its all a learning curve!