Spitfire 2nd attempt

[Dangermouse]

Right here it is again with more DoF and something else so please crit and give me some tips as this is very addictive

1 Original

2 Cropped

3 Another

 

[feek]

I like these shots , anything to do with Spitfires really. Could I make a suggestion, without upsetting you? Would it make sense to base the focal point on the cockpit/pilot? Still I do like these a lot. Rob

 

[Paulie-W]

Depending on just how close you are to the spit. I would suggest starting off at f9 and working from there. This was at f32 with just the pop up flash.

 

[Dangermouse]

I like these shots , anything to do with Spitfires really. Could I make a suggestion, without upsetting you? Would it make sense to base the focal point on the cockpit/pilot? Still I do like these a lot. Rob

Funny you say that the focus was on the cockpit but at the time the shutter fired as it was on self timer the spit must shift slightly as I spin the prop so will try to stop this and have another bash and no you didnt upset me as all crit gets taken on board and utilised

 

[Dangermouse]

Depending on just how close you are to the spit. I would suggest starting off at f9 and working from there. This was at f32 with just the pop up flash.

Going to have another go with a cloudy sky backdrop and clone the stand out next to see what that brings

 

[Paulie-W]

Going to have another go with a cloudy sky backdrop and clone the stand out next to see what that brings

You could always prop it on the corner of a table and get low, then have real sky as the BG

 

[Dangermouse]

You could always prop it on the corner of a table and get low, then have real sky as the BG

Great Idea seeing as I do live in a third storey flat .....thanks mate

 

[Paulie-W]

Great Idea seeing as I do live in a third storey flat .....thanks mate

No worries. Its supposed to be a good sky day tomorrow too, so i will be looking forward to these Mk 3 pics