Suzuki Swift 1.5GLX 5DR

Darryn

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Opinions wanted on the photos more than the car tbh, but all opinions and criticism are more than welcome.

Please bare in mind ive not used my camera in angry since pretty much Silverstone F1 last year, now ive got the Swift and a Driving license thats all going to change.
 
22 views and no comments, thats not good... maybe i shouldnt have linked to a gallery but the photos ive uploaded are all 1000pixels across there longest edge so i cannot post them directly.

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As a bit of a petrol head myself, I think you have failed to capture the character of the Swift. It's one of those "cheeky" fun to drive roller skate cars which I don't see in the pictures.

Admittedly the weather didn't help, but the paintwork looks dull and you could have done with getting down lower to take some shots, and either lost the puddle altogether, or maybe used it to reflect some of the car ?

You had a great opportunity with those strong clouds a great landscape, but, IMPO, you didn't make the most of it.

I'm no specialist when it comes to shooting cars... Here's my ST at Ford Fair last year. But I have tried to make the angles interesting.

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And the paintwork looks a bit more "alive".
 
location doesn't suite the car imo would suite a 4x4 or a rally car more imo sky looks good though.

Try some urban locations seeing as its a city car.You got the right idea about composition etc just need a better place to depict the car.Best shots are 5,7,8.

http://www.auto-photography.co.uk ;) for some ideas.
 
I'd've got rid of that plastic bag or whatever it was in the background first off. And yeah, I think it would be better in a brighter, more "urban" environment.

Jelster, your pic has a burger van in the background...
 
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