the portrait challenge

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paul holder
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to those who answered the last quote for help here is the finished picture..... was taken inside on and around the sofa. yes it was a chellenge and any c & c welcome. yes i know this is the raw image it has been edited for the final print.
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yes their are 17 of them.....:eek::eek::eek:
 
There is always one that doesn't look at the camera. lol
 
Honestly? I think you ignored good advice.

Its a nice pic, but the curtains are a mess, you can see the radiator, and everyone is too tight in the frame. I think it needs more work to make it print worthy.

I dont mean to sound nasty, but thats just my 2p :)
 
I think you did well to get everyone in the shot, but there are a few distractions which dont help. The main one for me is the lady in the middle, she has something sticking out of her head.

Would be good to see the edited version :)
 
all of the suroundings were edited and faded or covered. this is the pic we decided to use but have not got the edited version on the pc.
 
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