the sunset

[debrito]

well hi my 3rd go at sunsets or should i say sky well her goes

dont know if its ok or not but i just like it !!! can you give me any tips on what to do and more in portantly what not to do
thanks

sony a200 standard lens and m42 adaptor with old 50mm pentacon mc

 

[ekimeno]

I like the shot for what it is, but it may have been improved by getting both the grass and horizon line in focus (ie. smaller aperture).

 

[Trev4]

For me the grass does add interest and perspective, but I agree with ekimeno about the focus and using a smaller aperture.
In addition, I would like to see more foreground, perhaps move slightly farther away from the grass so that its still well into the foreground but slightly further away from the camera. Thats only my opinon, and overall its a good shot.
Trev

 

[debrito]

OR so if i use a smaller app that would of made them both in focus aaararrr
ill try that next time as for being 2 close i think i agree now that you point it out
thanks thats a great help

 

[Stev]

I like its simplicity, the horizon being oof actually works for me, as it blends into the sky

 

[EdinburghGary]

A decent and somewhat simple shot, the grass appears out of focus which is a shame. I think if it were pin sharp with an out of focus background, it would be a lot better.

Gary.