Thoughts & CC please...

[kentt]

as this is not my normal discipline and would appreciate any thoughts so I can improve my static compositional skills

I've linked it as its larger than forum rules allow, HERE.

Thanks for looking.

 

[andrew748]

i like it, bright colours and nothing to distract from the main subject.

 

[kentt]

i like it, bright colours and nothing to distract from the main subject.

Thanks Andrew, I appreciate you take the time to look and comment

I meant to say in the first post that I used two EX580 flashs, one on camera (master) the other on a stand (slave) toward the rear of the car, and about 1/2 a stop down for the ambient light.

 

[Pixel-Snapper]

Lighting looks good on the car against the ambient background...

I'd just like to the car framed with more room at the front so it gives the impression of driving into the picture not away from it.

other than that nail on the head chap

 

[kentt]

Lighting looks good on the car against the ambient background...

I'd just like to the car framed with more room at the front so it gives the impression of driving into the picture not away from it.

other than that nail on the head chap

Thanks for the reply, its interesting you should say that, a friend of mine that said the same thing. That's what prompted me to post the shot for a bit more CC and advice.

 

[Snownation]

I think it would look slightly better without that audi.
It seems a little out of place.

 

[Bumph GB]

Something doesn't feel right about it, i think it's a combination of the darkness under the trees and the cold light of the flash against the warm background but the un-natural lighting just doesn't do it for me. Maybe a bit more processing could counter this?