I like it, looks like you've hit the nail on the head first time
Not sure technically but the edit is not to my taste. Sorry
For me, the colour and vignette is very dated.
I have to say I pretty much agree with the above. The shot itself is a belter. Great expression in the childs face and the eyes are fantastic. I don't feel though the shot has been done justice with the colouring and of course the vignetting.