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Hi,
I've had my camera for about half a year now so I'm quite confident with the basics and got a 300mm f4 for Christmas. The other day I took it out for my first attempt at birds, so I'm looking for comments on how to improve in any way, from colours, to composition. I don't think they are bad (and am very impressed with the detail!), however there are still areas I can improve on, which I'll explain as I go.
So first I'd just like to know what this one is, as I haven't a clue:
I'm not sure if this is a female Chaffinch or not, but anyway, here is my main problem. The eye and the feathers around are beautifully sharp, however the focus seems to drop off already around the beak and especially the feathers on the right edge. I was told by someone else that at effectively 630mm f5.6 isn't enough so I take it that's what caused this, however in a further picture I've used f8 and still have such a shallow DoF, am I doing something wrong?
I just really like the composition of this shot, probably my favourite of the day from that point of view.
Another of my favourites from a compositional point of view
Here's a Chaffinch at f8 and still not got the beak in focus..should I up the f stop even further in future?
Another example of the dof being too shallow, however I love how beautifully rendered the feather detail has been. This is an actual pixel crop.
Anyway that's all, I realise that's quite a lot of photos! Full sizes, along with a few others are of course on my flickr.
Hi,
I've had my camera for about half a year now so I'm quite confident with the basics and got a 300mm f4 for Christmas. The other day I took it out for my first attempt at birds, so I'm looking for comments on how to improve in any way, from colours, to composition. I don't think they are bad (and am very impressed with the detail!), however there are still areas I can improve on, which I'll explain as I go.
So first I'd just like to know what this one is, as I haven't a clue:
I'm not sure if this is a female Chaffinch or not, but anyway, here is my main problem. The eye and the feathers around are beautifully sharp, however the focus seems to drop off already around the beak and especially the feathers on the right edge. I was told by someone else that at effectively 630mm f5.6 isn't enough so I take it that's what caused this, however in a further picture I've used f8 and still have such a shallow DoF, am I doing something wrong?
I just really like the composition of this shot, probably my favourite of the day from that point of view.
Another of my favourites from a compositional point of view
Here's a Chaffinch at f8 and still not got the beak in focus..should I up the f stop even further in future?
Another example of the dof being too shallow, however I love how beautifully rendered the feather detail has been. This is an actual pixel crop.
Anyway that's all, I realise that's quite a lot of photos! Full sizes, along with a few others are of course on my flickr.
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