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I am looking for some feedback on my website design etc
http://www.danbriant.com

The website was coded to run in IE7, Firefox 2 & 3, Opera and Safari.
The whole site was designed to be a massive noticeboard which in theory could be changed whenever i wanted to etc.

Ideas and suggestions are welcome don't be afriad to comment i don't bite (only on a full moon)
 
Having any problems with your host? The site seems to have been down most of the morning and has only just resurfaced.

And can I ask you what the point of the website is? It's quite tricky to comment on the design when the purpose is unclear.
 
Yer we were ment to be in the process of rebuilding the server but at the last second we noticed that the backups had failed and had been for many months! So we have that problem fixed, and it's gonna be rebuilt next weekend. Thats why it was down as we blocked traffic to server to stop people making changes before we rebuilt it but issues cropped up.
The website is my own personal website with a blog and photography gallery. I wanted something that i could change and design around my feelings and mood etc. I wanted a design that could never become stagnent and could change whenever, thus the noteboard approach and as ya all know noteboards change a bit :)
 
Are you trying or intending to try selling your work through this site or is more a gallery to show off the a wider audience?
 
Well it's mostly a personal site, with a gallery to showcase stuff. I suppose i could try and sell some work from it
 
Home:

I have to be honest and say that I don't care for the overall design of the site at all. I just don't find the whole 'notice board' style appealing . It's certainly unique, at least in my experience, but it's not very attractive, at least to my eyes.

I do like the layout though. It's clean, simple, easy to navigate, well structured and very accessible. However, it is a little basic and I think you could do with jazzing it up a little.

The main problem for me here is that the page looks like a blog. And I guess that's exactly what it is. The problem with it being a blog is that it becomes an intensely personal thing which I don't feel works well as a homepage to a website. If you want a blog, and why not, perhaps create a subdomain like blog.danbriant.com or put the blog in its own little section.

What I'd like to see here is an impressive homepage to show off your photography and really create a statement of intent. At the moment it's all a bit wordy and too friendly and I don't think it engages with the viewer in quite the way it's meant to.

Photography:

What's really bugging me here is the massive amount of space at the top of the page. I'm viewing in a 'standard' browser window and I've got to scroll down to see the bottom two rows of thumbnails. And speaking of the thumbnails, my instant response was to click on them to see some photos. And that doesn't work. Nor do the photos actually do anything - I would have expected some rotation at least.

I have to admit that it wasn't instantly apparent to me that there were categories on the left of the page to pick from. So perhaps that needs some work on making it more visible or perhaps I need to pay more attention. As for the galleries themselves, they are nicely put together but the overall feel is a bit clunky. I don't like the EXIF info underneath each image and I don't see why there is a need to make each image clickable for a second, larger version. The ones embedded into the page are fine for size - the larger versions just make it easier for me to steal them.

Studio and Location are nicely laid out, but I don't get why Personal suddenly goes into a vertical stack? And I'm really not a fan of your Equipment page. It's totally irrelevant to anyone viewing the site that's not really into the photography. If you're going to review photography equipment, create a review site. It doesn't look or feel right on a portfolio site.

About Me:

Some of this is okay but some is a little bit too much information for your viewing public. I'd recommend taking all the equipment stuff out and replacing it with more about who you are, what you do, why you do it and the clients you've worked for. Perhaps even talk about what services you could offer?

Computers:

I have to say this page is somewhat pointless. As with the Equipment page it's really only going to be of interest to people who like this sort of thing and are they going to be the people you are attracting to the site? It just smacks of showing off and saying how clever you are, which I'm sure is not really the case. Some of the language used is also a bit too friendly.

Time Vault:

Not really sure what this is supposed to do but I'll assume its not working at the moment. I'm guessing it will contain either links of versions to older pages of the blog?

Overall:

Part of the reason I asked the questions above was that I couldn't quite figure out what the site was for. It seems to be attempting to be a number of different things but none of them really work in their own right. In terms of the coding and the general layout, it's very impressive. If that's your own work then pat yourself on the back. As I've mentioned I don't care much for the actual design as I don't understand the reasoning and I think it will be lost on a few people, but that's your call.

From what I can see your photography is very good. And you also seem to have a participial passion for writing and reviewing kit. So I'd recommend splitting the site up into its constituent parts and allowing each room to breathe. Have the homepage as more of a welcome and introduction to the site as a whole and put your blog and reviews in a separate sub-section, away from the photography. Then make more of your individual galleries and show off the excellent photography in a more appropriate light as it really deserves it.

I know you don't want to start selling photos through the site at the moment, but the overall feel isn't one of a portfolio. It feels a little too personal and friendly at the moment and needs a touch of commercial sheen added to it to make it really work.
 
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