Hiya Lynne,
Ouch .... this week does seem to have given you the punch babes.
I'm really sorry to say (and I feel so bad saying this after the fab comments you left on my thread) but I have to be honest here......
Neither of the shots do anything for me this week
(but don't worry we all have weeks like this .... and considering the weather hasn't been too bright of late it is well understandable).
Having said that, I don't know if my critique is going to be too constructive .... but heyho it is early morning and I can't sleep so I might as well make use of the time.
#1 OMG your model has a gorgeous face/side profile, even though it looks like he has a bit of lunch on the corner of his lips, which could quite easily be resolved
I like the idea you had for this photo, the pose is good ... the composition is poor, especially with the building in the background. It may have been better to find a spot with either a cloudy (even if dull sky) behind the model.
The only plus is the light reflection on the arm and face.
#2 Nice colours and details in the flower ... but the background lets it down. I think if you had kicked the camera into Manual (either manual or auto focus .... but I prefer manual focus) ...... set the exposure to 1/200, F22'ish (play about with it to lower number depending on external lighting), ISO 200 or 400 and set your flash compensation to between -1 to -2 you would have captured some true detail in the flower and got a darker background which would have really emphasised the brightness of the flower. I would have also perhaps taken the shot from different angles and perhaps got really low down looking up from an different angle. As it is .... it is too symmetrical and there is the very OE blob below it which is very distracting.
I'm sorry if this all sounds negative .... but I hope I have included some constructive ideas that may help for a future shoot. I have to say I am still very much on a learning curve myself ... but one area that I have developed a passion for is taking photos of flowers and so far am happy with most of the results and I am happy to share that learning experience with you if you are interested.
I realise that these two photos are way out of your comfort zone as a photographer and bearing that in mind ... I think you have done considerably well.
Cheers
Dawn