Could the missing 'something' be human presence, say, a guy in one of them old peaked caps up on the ladder?
Davy
As grim as a grim thing. I guess that's what you wanted tho..... I'm still in two minds as to whether you'd be better without the light section at the bottom of the frame.... :shrug:
But as GRIM goes - it works!
He wasn't about Davey!