Very striking image.
?is it actually a mouse - the shallow depth of field maybe means you had to get in very close to take the image
Compositionally ....
- I think it would be better with a squarish crop as the stuff at the sides doesn't add much, and probably distracts.
- Also (and may just be my laptop monitor) the very front of the teeth don't seem to be fully in focus
- I probably wouldn't have thought of this at the time but cleaning it up a bit might help also eg removing the bit of dirt between the teeth
I'm still very much getting to grips with B&W conversions so I can't articulate in technical terms what I want to say and hesitate to comment on someone else's but :.
- It looks a bit 'bright' to me (?do I mean 'Is it over-sharpened?')
- Some of the black areas look too black (don't know the technical term for the opposite of 'blown highlights')
Despite the apparent length of my comments I do like the image
(Honest Guv
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