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Just seen your open shot too... perfect!
Hi, Neil, missed a few of yours...
#4, mmmmmmm fruit pastels....., good idea, composition works well, leading you down the tube. I'd like to see the front pastel in focus and an overall shallower dof so the tube blurs out.
#5, first one for me. Nice depth but I'd prefer a lower angle so all the pinston thingamajig was in the photograph.
#6, who cares is the composition is of, you got a D90...
#7, so how do you spell "tenuous link"? You've done well with the exposure and shutter speed. Compositions's a bit off for me. Too much empty space lower right. You might want to try squatting down and getting the rock, middle left, in your lower left third??
Cheers and enjoy your new camea...
Hi
Really love the contrast in your shot from the pin sharp still objects and the moving water... especially the gravel in the bottom left. The water blur is perfect... can I be nosey and ask what shutter speed you used... It's just im trying to get a wee pocket guide together of shutter speeds for differing situations and you have caught the moderately flowing river really well here!
Great work
Mark
Great pics. No. 1 for me too. Love the motion blur of the wing and that beady eye looking back at the camera.
With a bit more sharpness that would be a truly great image. What was the shutter speed?
Patrick
#1 for me, Neil, well done with the processing.
As you state loosing the modern stuff would have helped but never mind.
I wasn't sure about all the open space at the bottom and tried viewing it with a bit less but for me it would take more away than it would add.
Cheers and you need some proper walking boots...
Hi Neil!
I just love your #1 photo! The PP made definitely works with the pub! If this car wasn't there would have been better to imagine it is old photo, but hey great job! If you add a bit of burn effect around the edges might improve the old photo look! But the what you did is great!
Very good!
Rayna
Hi Neil,
I like both of your photo's for 'Finish'. Really like the old style - was this a preset you used? If so, which program did you use? Looks really good! You are right about the car, aerial and cable but as you said this was not done due to time contraints so it doesn't matter
I like #2 because it reminds me of a Sunday afternoon (don't ask me why, especially since you took it on a Saturday!), I can feel the warmth of the fire! Like the reflections of the fire on the stone too.
Both great pics IMO
Will .
Hiya Neil,
Just when I think I am getting up to speed with everyone's 52 I come along another that I haven't visited yet, so please accept my apologies that it has taken me 10 weeks to find yours. I will have to do a quick catch-up now:
Week 2: ................................
..................I have really enjoyed looking through your project and look forward to keeping up with it, now that I have it tagged I have no excuse not to
Good luck with the rest of the weeks.
Cheers
Dawn
Hi Neil, just seen your finish photographs, everything has really been covered critique wise. I do like them both, really like the processing with the pub.
Hi Neil, just seen your finish photographs, everything has really been covered critique wise. I do like them both, really like the processing with the pub.
Your trio is certainly...different
I can't decide on your red light. Maybe the subject is wrong for the colour? For me the red works for the Vodka but not the others... of course these are compositional gripes and nothing about the technicalities of using lights on a still life shot. My knowledge there is minuscule
Hi Neil
Trio....ooooh my fave 3 drinks...
ps , What on earth are snoots ?
Hi Neil I like your trio, I've been meaning to try the whole Pringles tube thing. I think that there is slightly too much space at the bottom (maybe crop to at least the edge of the reflection of the JD label?). What did you use as a reflective 'floor'?
Hi Neil
sorry , seem to have managed to miss a few of your weeks somehow :bonk:
Delicate .... I'm envoius of people who can take this type of shot so well & that now includes you Focus on the rocks is great & the water effect is just great I have a D80 & no realy idea how to create that shot...care to share some pointers ?...............
ps , What on earth are snoots ?
Hi Neil!
I like your idea for the Trio theme! Contrary to Tina I like the red light with the whiskey bottles because I think it enhances the alcohol colour. I think that if you crop it a bit higher it will look better. Now the crop is too close to the bottle caps (on the vodka) for my liking.
Great idea and also adding reflections definitely adds to the photo. What is the surface you are using or are the reflections added in PP?
Rayna
I quite like the reflection.
Bit too much red in the Southern Comfort for me and would be nice if the flash wasn't so prominent in the bottles.
Cheers.
Hiya Neil,
I actually love your trio image.................
My only tiny critique, is that it is a bit wonky, i.e., leaning a bit to the left. Not sure if that is because you consumed half the bottle of JD and SC during the shoot
Also the bit of light reflection is a teeny bit distracting ..... but not much.
Otherwise I think you have a fab image, well done
Cheers
Dawn
Hi Neil
great minds n all....thats 3 of us who went with the same idea so must be fairly obvious link between Knowledge & Taxi drivers I've a soft spot for SC & think it works really well in this shot & love how shiny the Taxi's appear to be....is that as they were or some other PP technique I need to learn ?
The only spoiler for me is the van at the back & the back end of the front taxi creeping in. But still a great shot
I prefer your orignal shot of the shoes , the color seems more muted in the reshoot but def better with the whole word Paris in....can you combine the 2 Sorry for being awkward:bonk:
Patrick,Hi Neil
Love the shoes shot. Your friend got a bargain! This is a really stiking image.
I prefer the composition of the second shot, but much prefer the colours in the original. Well done.
Excellent on-topic pic for the theme "knowledge. It's a great candid shot. The selective colour is very nicely done - it definitely adds to the image without being too dominant or garish. A polarisng filter would have helped here, but that's just me being picky.
Some great images in your 52.
Hiya Neil,
You have done well on both the Knowledge and re-shoot of the shoes.
Agree with what you say about selective colouring working for certain shots and this is definitely one of those where it works well.
Cheers
Dawn
I'm at a cross roads at the moment (although this one has many roads!); I need (or is it more want!) extra filters, a better tripod, a 35mm prime, a remote, flash unit and the list goes on; but what do I get first :bang::bang:
Hiya Neil,
Well done on catching up the past 2 weeks.
Moderation: I love this photo, well done For me you have got it spot on and I can't really fault it. Perhaps a little soft, but I think that adds to the image.
Empty: Now this I really like as an idea for the theme and well done to you for waking up so early to capture the shots before all the kids come out to play. As you say the weather is a tad dull, but in a way that adds to the ambiance and hence the park being empty.
#1 like the composition and how you have used the lead in through the ring of the see-saw.
#2 Another good use of focus through the swings, perhaps a bit of colour saturation to give it a bit of punch might help.
#3 Love the way you have captured the round-about in motion to give it an almost ghost-like feel. With this one I can almost hear the echoes of children laughing as they play.
An excellent set ..... and BTW you have just reminded me that I haven't yet sorted through all the photos I took at the park a few weeks ago. Got some motion shots of my son on the round-abouts, will have to see how they came out.
You are doing a fantastic job with your project and I look forward to keeping up with your progress
Cheers
Dawn
Hi Neil,
Some very inspired shots here mate.
I love the shoe shot, rich in colour & very stylish. I'm sure it does look good on canvas.
Moderation was a hard theme for me as well, thought about the empty bottle but guessed a few might take their own twist on it. It's a nice shot & well composed.
I love your idea for empty, #1 is my favourite as well. It's obviously a well used piece of equipment judging by the raindow of colours on the handle.
I do enjoy looking around to see what everyone has done for the theme, some are obvious choices but many more are inspired choices.
Mick
Hi Dawn,
Thanks for looking in.
Enjoy looking sorting through the pictures of your son - it's about time you looked at some of your own photos rather than all the 52'ers!