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Hi Sanna,
Some interesting shots here. Love the Hard pic, and agree with all the others about light. If your using non flash light sources, you need to get extra light in there. I recommend for a shot like that, just use a CD out of shot to reflect light back under the stones and kill some of the hard shadows.
For your clutter shot, again a great idea. I think the main criticism I have is that the shot looks like it is in three pieces, rather than one image.
Firstly the main focus is the sharp paperclips, and these sit bang in the middle of the shot. I think they would have more impact on the lower third line.
Also the transition from out of focus to sharp is too abrupt for me because there is nothing to help my eye adjust to the change. (I hope this makes sense). Maybe a paper clip on the edge of shot over the transition third, would help guide me onto the sharp paperclips.
Also the top of the shot is empty. Maybe a tighter crop would help frame the image better.
Hope this is helpful, and keep up the good work.
Rgds
Adie
Some interesting shots here. Love the Hard pic, and agree with all the others about light. If your using non flash light sources, you need to get extra light in there. I recommend for a shot like that, just use a CD out of shot to reflect light back under the stones and kill some of the hard shadows.
For your clutter shot, again a great idea. I think the main criticism I have is that the shot looks like it is in three pieces, rather than one image.
Firstly the main focus is the sharp paperclips, and these sit bang in the middle of the shot. I think they would have more impact on the lower third line.
Also the transition from out of focus to sharp is too abrupt for me because there is nothing to help my eye adjust to the change. (I hope this makes sense). Maybe a paper clip on the edge of shot over the transition third, would help guide me onto the sharp paperclips.
Also the top of the shot is empty. Maybe a tighter crop would help frame the image better.
Hope this is helpful, and keep up the good work.
Rgds
Adie