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I like that, it's a good strong image and great for the theme. I agree with what everyone else has said about the composition etc ... well done (I prefer the darker version also)
As I'm finding out this week, point of focus is a very subjective assessment when there are various to choose from. Looks a little too high in the frame in this instance. If you could move it onto a third the eye would find it more comfortable to rest there.
Your edit is a massive improvement Shaun.
The first one was a little flat but the tighter crop and mono conversion of the second works for me,
Well done!
Seem to be struggling with my 52 of late due to work or I should say life in general.
The close-up B&W for me too.
When I saw the original, my first thought was I'd like to see a closer crop with more focus on the lenses and that's exactly what you've done.
The B&W's worked well and really brought out the reflections in the metal. IMO it's one you can be proud of.
The idea of one photo a week just seems so easy doesn't it? The reality . . . it's damn hard!
I don't know how the 365ers do it.