Em.

Very subtle.
 
That IS a nice pic Gav, very well lit and processed too.

The one crit I'd offer is that Em's teeth look a llittle odd in the image as presented due to the processing and tonal range etc, and I'd probably be inclined to do some local processing that made them either more obviously teeth or just stand out a bit less. Just a suggestion.
 
juggler said:
oo nice!
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Thank you, Simon.
Plain Nev said:
Very subtle.
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Cheers Nev.
dans_shutter said:
Another great result Gav!
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Thanks Dan.
ancient_mariner said:
That IS a nice pic Gav, very well lit and processed too.

The one crit I'd offer is that Em's teeth look a llittle odd in the image as presented due to the processing and tonal range etc, and I'd probably be inclined to do some local processing that made them either more obviously teeth or just stand out a bit less. Just a suggestion.
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Thank you, Toni, I know what you mean about the teeth, they have a shadow cast on them due to their angles, I tried to brighten them but they looked odd, I will have a play a see if I can do something, may try pinching the lips together, but hate the thought of liquify, but lips do move so may be this is ok..??
Thank you for feedback, may need false fangs for next time :LOL:
 
Very ice portrait style capture Gav.
 
ancient_mariner said:
Yes, to me it does. But it's also yours & Em's picture - do you feel happier with this?
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Cheers Toni, I'm happier with it, not sure why I couldn't get it right first time, you pointing it out made me revisit it with 'fresh eyes', may tinker more but that's for another day.
Thank you again, really appreciate the feedback.
 
Gav. said:
Cheers Toni, I'm happier with it, not sure why I couldn't get it right first time, you pointing it out made me revisit it with 'fresh eyes', may tinker more but that's for another day.
Thank you again, really appreciate the feedback.
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You're very welcome - I appreciate being able to comment honestly without causing upset. (y)
 
The eye contact is immediate, just the right positioning to show the whites, and very good placement of the lights.
The shadow bleed is well placed and the pose is great.
Liking this image a lot, lovely lady too.
 
reheat module said:
The eye contact is immediate, just the right positioning to show the whites, and very good placement of the lights.
The shadow bleed is well placed and the pose is great.
Liking this image a lot, lovely lady too.
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Thank you, Paul, appreciate the feedback.
 
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