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To be honest the first two are a little cold, though maybe that was a deliberate effect, I just don't think that it's working all that well :shrug: both of the first work from a composition PoV but I do think with the stance of the second she needs a more aggressive look on her face 
Sorry to say but that last one I hate, her position in the car makes here head look massive and makes it look like it's been superimposed on there in photo shop
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Sorry to say but that last one I hate, her position in the car makes here head look massive and makes it look like it's been superimposed on there in photo shop
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Second is pretty good, technically, the first, you have lost focus on the eyes, it looks as though the nose has picked up focus. Third agree entirely with Matthew.