1st Birthday Party

[chewyuk]

Was asked to take some mono shot's for my nieces first birthday party.

Before I send them on, I would love to get some feedback if possible...
These are a selection of the shots chosen.

Have I hit the mark ?
The background was not great, so one or two messy backgrounds I think.

Not a portrait but hopefully sets the scene !

Cheers,

Neil

 

[InaGlo]

1st shot is my pick ... has what I call real munchability!

I adore the tones in that shot... wish my mono's came out like that!

 

[dd-photography]

I hope your not calling the background of 3 messy! You could be in some real trouble if you are mate!
haha! just kidding!
yeah really nice pics!
black & white looks good and number 1 is my favourite!

 

[chewyuk]

Thanks Both ... I like Number 1 too but my fav is 3 I think.

 

[oldgit]

Composition wise good.
Processing, look a bit dark in the 1st and 3rd ?:shrug:?
In the 1st I'd be tempted to lose the background a tad more and clone out the chair legs

 

[chewyuk]

Yep I agree - FAncy having ago

 

[oldgit]

Yep I agree - FAncy having ago

Not in work. I hate trying to use Gimp .... blergh.. buttons are all in the wrong places

 

[oldgit]

Here you go, best I can do with the limited pixels available.

 

[antihero]

very nice, think #3 is my fave, just love the simplicity of it.

great angle on #2 as well! i'd be very happy with them.

 

[hypnotic]

I like the cake shot.

Would like to see that shot with just the flame in colour.

 

[chewyuk]

Thanks Paul - Advice take, seat cloned out, images printed, framed and ready for collection when my sister in law to be ! arrives (get them brownie points in) on Saturday, whilst I am in Germany dressed as a gorilla for my stag !

 

[KeriAnn]

Awh, lovely set of shots!!