39 Steps

[lfc1892]

Ok, maybe not 39, but really couldn't think of a decent enough title. I rather like this, but that maybe because i'm drawn to scenes with strong lines and shapes. Does it work for you and is it interesting enough for you? Thanks for looking and as always, all comments and thoughts would be most appreciated.

 

[Photodiva]

Hi. Nice location, but I don't think you made the best of it.

 

[lfc1892]

Hi. Nice location, but I don't think you made the best of it.

Thanks for the reply. What would you change?

 

[Photodiva]

Hi. I think a different viewpoint, someone coming toward you, wearing something colorful maybe. Think *** shadows, may be adiffernt time of day. Go back again if you can and explore possibilities

What ? No idea why there are ***?

 

[purplepleaser]

its a good shot, not sure something is missing, maybe a mono converstion or just more pop as such. I need to get and snap them steps though.

 

[Forbiddenbiker]

Cool shot, I really like the composition and lead way. I think you could have framed it a tad better, fraction more space on the left for that curved rail and the missing bottom of that near post ruins what would have been spot on...just in my opinion like.

 

[lfc1892]

Thanks for the replies guys. Only had the NEX with me so will pop back with the 10mm and work a little harder. Thanks.

 

[Peter-T]

I've got to ask, is this Eagles Meadow in Wrexham? Looks awfully familliar!

If it is, you've made what is a very dull part of that area look much more interesting?

 

[lfc1892]

Afraid not my friend, this is just outside Brum.

 

[Forbiddenbiker]

Im so going to copy this composition. ...better framed like, its so very good I think. ha.

 

[lfc1892]

i charge ten percent commission! ;-)