these are just general remarks as there are far too many shots there for me to go into specifics.
I think most of them are too contrasty and you've lost too much shadow and highlight detail.
some of your compositions are a bit off too, the pictures arent really telling a story on their own, some tight crops and short depth of field have left too little in the shot to really explain what is going on.
the shot of the bearded man 3 or 4 from the end is the best shot in my opinion but would have been much better had you kept all of the sign in the shot.