A bee in the garden

[doublem1]

Taken a while ago. I have always like this photo. Was my first attempt at taken one of a bee.


024/365 by doublem_1, on Flickr

 

[objohn]

Hello,
Personally I would remove the flower to the right with a crop. The reason for this is that the background behind the in-focus flower is nicely lost due to the depth of field however the other flower as its also out of focus just gets lost and looks a bit tatty to my eye.

With a tighter crop I think you'd have a really nice picture

 

[doublem1]

Had an attempt at retouching it like you said. I'm not too good at the process though.


DSC_0041 by doublem_1, on Flickr

 

[objohn]

I think you did a good job actually!

 

[pepi1967]

Second one is better.