First one is just too much flower in the frame. It needs more space like you have in the second one. As it is I find myself looking at the leaf and bright background bits as the flower head is all the same with no focal interest.
Second one is a much better composition. Only thing letting it down is that the focus is not on the face of the apple but on a leaf behind it.
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