A few from Donegal

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Peter Barber
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A few from Fahan in Dongeal taken last night C&C welcome.


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I had the same thought about both of these images: I'd be happy with the left hand half of each of them. The right hand sides seem weaker to me. So it's a crop down the centre and Bob's your uncle.
 
The composition and tones of no 2 are really good, a really nice sky you have caught there.

The perspective in no 1 is very nice, with good foreground interest in bottom rh and good tones . It is a weaker composition and imo more could have been made from the wooden structure which also appears soft.

Tom
 
Lovely pics. & clouds. I suggest that more of the pier should be included, eliminating open space on the right. A contrast boost would also improve the shots as they are a little soft. Misty
 
Thanks for the comments and advice, I will try some of the changes suggested.

Peter
 
This is what I had in mind for these images:

#1

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#2

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They seem stronger to me. I may well be wrong.
 
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