A few shots in the studio with Alfie 6 months Ruby 8 months

[chunkey20012001]

Hi guys i recently shot these with a friend and was wondering if anyone could give a positive criticism on these shots. I know technically there not perfect but the parent's are thrilled and im quite happy with how they have turned out all shot in my front room too which was a challenge especially as they both know how to crawl!!!!!

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Ruby 1 fb by danielphotographyuk, on Flickr

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Alfie 1 fb by danielphotographyuk, on Flickr

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Alfie Ruby 1 fb by danielphotographyuk, on Flickr

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Alfie 3 by danielphotographyuk, on Flickr

Thank you in advance.

 

[^Joe]

I think the expressions and comps are fantastic. I'm not sure if it's my awful monitor but these look quite bright / high powered flash to me?

 

[BooBear]

Love the expressions and eye contact. On my monitor (calibrated laptop), I can see a lot of banding and other marks on the backgrounds, which could do with a bit of work.

 

[chunkey20012001]

Thank you very much for the replies and much appreciated.

 

[Nick_1981]

Nice set, i particularly like No4. But agree with the comments above that some look over exposed even for high key (No. 2&3).

 

[darren.lewis1984]

I'm only looking on my iPhone but I love these! I'm generally not a fan of kids (heartless, I know) but all four of these made me smile

 

[chunkey20012001]

Thank you again for all the positive comments much appreciated

 

[The23rdman]

The eyes are overworked, they're over exposed and the backgrounds are not evenly finished off, but they're lovely moments.

 

[CjC Photos]

Agree with comments, like the last one best

 

[pepi1967]

last one for me but a great set.