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Hey folks,
looking for a critique on these images. Some are similar with slightly different composition. The shoot wasn't actually in a studio but the make up artist's bedroom using a speedlite. I actually noticed if I zoom in enough on the RAW, I can see the reflection of the window in her eyes... :D

Anyway, thoughts?


Untitled #382 by Rescid, on Flickr


Untitled #386 by Rescid, on Flickr


Untitled #354 by Rescid, on Flickr


Untitled #350 by Rescid, on Flickr


Untitled #390 by Rescid, on Flickr


Untitled #368 by Rescid, on Flickr
 
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Number 6 is my favorite. Love the background. I think a bit of fill would of been good to eiminate the shaddow caused by the eyelashes and I might be tempted to do a bit of skin smoothing for her.
 
Not a bad set, but i think they could be improved if the model was look into the blank space as opposed to looking away, if you get what i mean.....
 
Cheers guys. I had very little in the way of kit for this shoot. I did bring my second speedlite to work as a slave but it decided to not work when I started setting it up, otherwise I would have added a bit of fill.
 
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