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You're getting a dab hand at this painting malarky...nice clean image.
my only niggle, I would've cloned out the green grape stalk, very picky I know - sorry
Graham.
Lighting is good, as is composition. I just think it is a bit tight in the frame Matt.
Excellent quality image Matt.
you must have the patience of a saint.
Really like this Matt, nice composition, and as you said, its like a 3d effect
What did you use to light paint with Matt?
Don't know how this one passed me bye Matt - you're getting plenty of mileage out of those grapes
Overall I like the shot, but again, I'm going to harp on about the background - same comments as the fruitbowl TBH - which does at least mean if you rig a small "room set" it'll get used and re-used plenty
Also - I think the bottle gets slightly lost from the shoulders and neck - the body is bright - presumably light reflecting from the back label of the bottle, but by the neck it's almost blended away until the foil kicks in. Not sure, but can you get light shining up through the bottle ? Maybe using a lightbox under the bottle, with black card base that has a hole in it, just slightly smaller than the diameter of the bottle. Then "blip" the lightbox on and off to light the bottle up... Not sure if it'd work, but it might be worth an experiment :shrug:
bensambrook said:Really like this image Matt, agree with the comment on the lighting towards the top of the bottle and I would love to see it with no/less spill on the background if possible
Manc Man said:Love this one Matt, your mind must be working in overdrive with the number of creative ideas your coming up with. Need to have a bash at light painting myself when I get time.
I like this. My only extra quibble would be the stalk that overlaps the bottle. I think if that was'nt there and the grape at the bottom right of the label was missing so that the label wasn't touching the bunch it might improve the shot.