Amateur Photographer, wanting to show off some images

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jinjoh_ninjoh said:
Hi guys!
I've not been doing photography long and i would like to show you guys some of my photos.

All constructive criticism is welcome!
I'm hoping to learn a lot.
http://cloud.tapatalk.com/s/58ff913c45af1/1831E1F6-7BE2-4669-A057-F776D0F2C0D8_zpsta5nchmf.jpg?

http://cloud.tapatalk.com/s/58ff91527c9f9/tunnel.jpg?

http://cloud.tapatalk.com/s/58ff9166d148c/lake 1.jpg?

http://cloud.tapatalk.com/s/58ff9173ef808/lake path1.jpg?


Thanks for looking guys :)
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Post some pictures, you'll get more responses. People tend not to click on links in case they are clickbait.

Besides, the links don't work... :)
 
Welcome to TP.

Nice varied set, not sure if there is colour issue on the last one, also agree with Ken. Add to flickr, copy bbcode and post on thread.
 
Links are working now, but still best to post actual pics.
 
jinjoh_ninjoh said:
Let's see of this works :)

https://www.flickr.com/gp/154088764@N02/tWA1v3

https://flic.kr/p/SVJ5Vd

https://www.flickr.com/gp/154088764@N02/B6ebpV

https://flic.kr/p/TCc5J3

https://flic.kr/p/Ud6MMD

https://flic.kr/p/Ud6MSi

https://flic.kr/p/Ud6MNR

https://flic.kr/p/Ud6N3t

https://flic.kr/p/TCc61q
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Nope. You need the BBCode, preferably not too big. You get the Bbcode from the 'share' (right facing arrow) option. The options are 'share', .embed', 'email' and 'BBcode'
 
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The butterfly is nice - decently sharp, good colours, nicely exposed. The crop is a little tight, but that's OK.

Canal scene, good front to back depth of field, the colour balance is slightly too magenta (path is pink) and the chromatic aberration needs fixing (if using lightroom this is straightforward). Compositionally the path is a good lead line, but there's not much exciting going on and the scene is a little cluttered. There's a lock further ahead, and that might have provided possibilities for a stronger composition.

Angel of the north. Composition is good, statue on hillock, lead lines at the base, dramatic sky. IMO the HDR processing sucks, making the statue appear to glow in a way that looks unreal and filling the sky with artifacts from the jpeg compression. There's also strong chromatic aberration around the statue (red & green lines around the edges) that need fixing. Processed well without HDR this could be a strong image, but like this not so much.

HTH.
 
Only no 2 breaks the mould for me
Good going!!
Cheers
GEOF
 
Composition on 1 & 3 is good but 2 doesn't do anything for me. They do seem to have a lot of CA in them, what were you shooting with? You might be able to dial that out in Lightroom if you have it?
 
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