Amy's first shoot

[Rogdodge]

Amy contacted me and we did a shoot yesterday mostly in the studio but one outside shot shown at the end too. She and I are both inexperienced at this! Welcome your thoughts!

Studio Shots

The outside shot

Thanks for any feedback

 

[johnb]

In no. 1 the shadows especially the necklace annoy me also the white background is variable in colour probably from the angle of the lights???

No.2 stray hairs are my only problem

3 & 4 are nice imho

 

[BandyQuill]

number 1, 2 and 4 i really like, however number 2 the feet i find slightly distracting and number 3 i cant help but look at the finger that seems to have made it into the lens...

for a first shoot i really like them and hope to see some more from you soon

 

[Y15HAL]

I think they're a nice set of pics....

They lack a little warmth and contrast though....

 

[Rustico]

Just a couple things I noticed:
1) The shadows in the first two seem a little harsh
2) In number 2, I can't deal with her face and her (seemingly disconnected) boots all at the same time
3) In number 3, there a reddish blob at the bottom right that is distracting.
A little nit-picking
Very good though, a little more warmth would be nice

 

[clintham]

other than the above...
i know you have a 5d mkii but your settings could be far better on the outdoor shot.
my exif reads it as:
1/5000th
f5.6
iso 1600
you could have achieved a decent shutter speed at iso 100/200 easily.

if i had a 5dmkii i might not be too bothered about iso setting either tho and tbh at that size it still looks great.