autumn (my take) on it

[dinorock]

following on from tinac,s shot, i made a comment about her shot that was,nt very helpfull and stated it,s not my thing so........ i had a go, tell me what you think. cheers mike.


_MJR9609.jpg by Mike Rockey, on Flickr

 

[mrtoad]

very red and very sat
a lot going on...busy...but interesting
i prefer the simpler approach of one or two leaves in decay

 

[birdy961]

Hmm
I have come back to this 2 or 3 times and I am afraid it does not quite work for me.

Not too sure why, I think it may be that there is no real focal point to the image, also not sure if its flash but the brighter spots are a bit distracting.

On a positive note I do like the colours

 

[ajj1001]

the colours are lovely but i don't particularly "look" at anything in it, could have tried focusing in on the berries on the left of the shot and having the rest as background colour?

 

[dinorock]

very red and very sat
a lot going on...busy...but interesting
i prefer the simpler approach of one or two leaves in decay

thanks geoff the very sat comment is interesting as my stats say -4 as it was so bright i had to pull the sat back a bit.

Hmm
I have come back to this 2 or 3 times and I am afraid it does not quite work for me.

Not too sure why, I think it may be that there is no real focal point to the image, also not sure if its flash but the brighter spots are a bit distracting.
On a positive note I do like the colours

hi robin, this is direct sunlight behind, me and i to liked the intense colours.

the colours are lovely but i don't particularly "look" at anything in it, could have tried focusing in on the berries on the left of the shot and having the rest as background colour?

thanks alison, i get your point about maybe focusing on the berries, then using the back groud to enhance it.

thanks all for taking the time to crit my pic